Novelette
Number of words : 10300
Percent of complex words : 12.7
Average syllables per word : 1.6
Average words per sentence : 23.9
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 14.6
Flesch : 51.4
Flesch-Kincaid : 12.0
PEOPLE
Joan
Amalgam Xenomathematican traveller in matter-antimatter needleship as data.
Anne
Amalgman traveller in matter-antimatter needleship as data.
Pirit
A Ghahari researcher.
Sando
The senior Noudah archaeologist.
Surat
One of the Noudah archaeologists.
Rali
One of the Noudah archaeologists.
Halzoun
A Noudah mathematician supervisor. Also a tedious spook type.
Jaqad
An academic archaeologist who is well connected in Tira.
Daya
A Noudah.
TECHNOLOGY
Antihydrogen
Antimatter equivalent of the hydrogen element.
Antiprotons
Antimatter equivalent of the proton.
Antineutrons
Antimatter equivalent of the neutron.
Gamma ray lasers
Used for making antimatter/matter spaceships.
Fullerene
A particular form or carbon.
Nanomachines
Very small builder robots.
CONCEPTS
Quantum Zeno effect
Keeps the decay in check to allow the antimatter process to work.
Chromatophores
Change the colours of a Noudah's skin.
Hypercube
A cube of greater than three dimensions.
The Big Crunch
A Niah desire for the unification of every field of mathematics that they considered significant.
Glory
The particles of fog were scattering the sunlight back, toward them, turning it one hundred and eighty degrees, causing a visible halo effect. Also: every black hole had its glory, twisting light around it in a tight, close orbit and flinging it back out again.
Quark-gluon plasma
A hot soup of elementary particles.
Baryon decay process
Doesn't exist.
Spreaders
Expansionist races.
Seekers
Races that look knowledge and insight from the world around it rather than expanding after money and power.
Sheath fluid
Bodily substance of a Noudah.
RACES
Noudah
People of the planet Joan and Anne visit.
Niah
An ancient Noudah people.
VEHICLES
Matter-antimatter needleship
Capable of extreme speeds and carrying passengers as information.
Small fusion-powered spacecraft
Vehicles built by the traveller's nanomachines to fit Noudah-level technology.
ORGANISATIONS
Amalgam
The metacivilization that spanned the galactic disk.
PLACES
Baneth
The gas giant's moon in the Noudah home system.
Tira
A dominant Noudah nation.
Ghahar
The other dominant Noudah nation.
The Cataract
A black hole remote partner to the Noudah's sun. Orbiting each other at a distance of about eighty billion kilometers.
MEDIA
Seekers and Spreaders: What We Must Learn from the Niah
An article in a Tiran journal.
PLOT
The Amalgman sends two scientists as information in a tiny ship to the Noudah homeworld. They want to study the ancient Niah mathematics, a race that lasted for three million years, but whose ancient artifact sites are in imminent peril.
After convincing the locals that they are aliens, Joan and Anne are each taken to one of the dominant Noudah nations. This splitting up leads to paranoia as each country worries the other has forced the aliens to spill their tech secrets. Violence erupts and Anne is a victim as she tries to get the information back to the Amalgam via a black hole trick. Joan will not let herself be used, either, and she can instantly turn off her Noudah body if she desires.
4.5 out of 5
http://outofthiseos.typepad.com/blog/files/GregEganGlory.pdf
Sunday, November 28, 2010
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