Short Story
Number of words : 5800
Percent of complex words : 13.6
Average syllables per word : 1.6
Average words per sentence : 17.1
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 12.3
Flesch : 55.5
Flesch-Kincaid : 9.8
PEOPLE
Sian
A communications engineer.
Michael
A holovision news editor.
Craig Bentley
A cyberneurologist.
Elvis Presley
A rock star.
Marilyn Monroe
An actress.
Foucault
Famous for a pendulum.
TECHNOLOGY
Ndoli Device
A neural-net computer implanted shortly after birth, imitates the brain down to neuron level.
Hover-camera
Mobile flying recorder.
Mature Extras
Fully grown clones of yourself.
MEDIA
Waiting for Godot
A play performed by augmented parrots.
Bond of Union
Lithograph by Escher.
Sian and Michael meet at work and fall in love. The Ndoli device confers immortality if desired, so they experiment. With switching bodies, with identical bodies, with clones of themselves. Then with identical minds, and finally being joined in one artificial body.
This complete revelation proves too much for them to be able to stay together as a couple.
3.5 out of 5
http://eidolon.net/?story=Closer&pagetitle=Closer§ion=fiction
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
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