Short Story
Number of words : 5400
Percent of complex words : 10.9
Average syllables per word : 1.5
Average words per sentence : 17.5
READABILITY INDICES
Fog : 11.4
Flesch : 59.0
Flesch-Kincaid : 9.4
PEOPLE
Mark Carver
In need of a specialist implant.
Amy
His dead love, died in an armed hold-up.
Patrick Anderson
The man who killed Amy. Did a deal and turned in his mates for a reduced sentence.
Miller
One of the armed robbers.
PLACES
The Implant Store
A place to buy skills and change your mind.
Chatswood
A suburb of Sydney.
MEDIA
Binary Search
A band.
TECHNOLOGY
Axiomatics
Term for next generation mind-altering implants.
ORGANISATIONS
Clockwork Orchard
Distributors of Implant product.
MEDIA
HAL
A bad robot.
PLOT
Mark Carver goes to buy a new generation Axiomatic Implant that will enable him to kill the murderer of his lover, Amy. He does so, gets a gun and accosts Anderson, now out on parole. He demands to know why he did it. The killer tells the truth, saying he got mad because their robbery was all screwed up, and chose her to shoot.
Mark blows him away, but hasn't received a visit from the police. He choosed to go get another Implant that will change his current state of mind, to something he will believe is true to himself.
4.5 out of 5
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